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Brooklyn
Plymouth Theatre
236 West 45th Street
New York
http://www.brooklynthemusical.com/

Reviewed November, 2004
Running time 1:50 - no intermission
Price Range $25 - $95


Pop-rock fans who thrill to those moments in a concert where a vocalist really lets loose and shakes the rafters will find quite a few such thrills in this unorthodox, undisciplined effort. The book, lyrics and music are all by Mark Shoenfeld and Barri McPherson, a pair of writers with no previous experience in musical theater. Their lack of experience at this intricate and tricky art form shows as they fail to apply the lessons of how to tell a story in a musical that others have learned over the last, oh, about a century. But that doesn't mean that they lack either talent or inspiration, and they certainly have assembled a marvelous cast! They turned to Broadway veteran Jeff Calhoun who directed last year's revival of Big River to shape up their product and get it in condition for a Broadway stage.  He obviously applied many a patch to the hole-filled structure, but as impressive as some performances are and as strong as some of the score is, the show still fails to come together in a coherent whole. Instead, this short but thrilling ride from highlight to highlight is more like a quirkily staged concert with a theme.

Storyline: A collection of street performers put on a show telling the story of the daughter of an American expatriate and a French entertainer who travels to America to find her father. It seems he deserted her mother when she was pregnant and so the girl, named "Brooklyn," never knew her father who came from the city for which she was named. Before he left, however, he began composing a lullaby which he never completed. Brooklyn becomes a singing star and uses the melody of that lullaby in her search for her father, the only man who would know the words to the song.

Many of the highest thrills during the show come when Eden Espinosa in the title role lets loose with rafter-shattering wails. Espinosa was the standby for Idina Menzel when Wicked opened last year and her delivery will remind many of Menzel in her "The Wizard and I" mode, especially when she hits her high final note in "Once Upon a Time" - perhaps the most memorable moment of the show. While Espinosa can carry the audience to the highest heights for a moment here and there, it is Cleavant Derricks who provides the most consistent pleasure from start to finish. He's the narrator of the piece and, as such, is a constant presence throughout. This experienced performer (he has a Tony Award for Best Featured Actor in a Musical for the 1981 Dreamgirls) provides an anchor for the show to return to again and again after wandering off on a tangent. He also provides a number of those vocal thrills but he keeps them from rising so high that they stop the flow of the show.

The story the street performers are enacting is a fairy tale, and every fairy tale needs an evil presence for the heroine to conquer. Here it is Ramona Keller as a music star whose trademark is the pair of dice she wears as a necklace. Her character's name is spelled "Paradice" and, just in case anyone misses it, they spell it out for you on the wall of the set. Keller has just as many thrill-inducing spots as does Espinosa, but since she's not the heroine, she holds back just a bit. As a result, when she really lets loose toward the end on "Raven," she's all the more effective. Underutilized are Kevin Anderson as the missing father figure, who follows Keller's thrilling "Raven" with his own thrilling "Sometimes," and Karen Olivo as Booklyn's mother (since names are so important here, let it be stated that her character's name is "Faith"). All are accompanied by an off-stage back-up group of three as well as a hidden orchestra of nine.

So, with all those "highlights" and "thrills," why doesn't the show actually work as a piece of musical theater? Because theater is about characters and these fairy tale stick-figures have little substance beyond their part of central story. Many a Broadway musical has covered up such paper-thin caricatures with comedy or with dance or with spectacle to keep audiences from noticing at least until the evening is over. Not so, this one-act, one-set, dance-less tale. Only the vocal fireworks divert attention. The piece is delivered without an intermission so you are out on the real street before 10 o'clock from an 8 o'clock show. Some will walk out thinking of how great the big moments were but, at $95 for an orchestra seat, some will exit asking "is that all there is?"

Music, Lyrics and Book by Mark Schoenfeld and Barri McPherson. Directed by Jeff Calhoun. Music supervision, arrangements and orchestrations by John McDaniel. Music Direction by James Sampliner. Design: Ray Klausen (set) Tobin Ost (costumes) Michael Gilliam (lights) Jonathan Deans and Peter Hylenski (sound). Cast: Kevin Anderson, Cleavant Derricks, Eden Espinosa, Ramona Keller, Karen Olivo.